My stumbling experiences perched on the high heels of life...
sad poem.broken mirrors still show images...N
WOW...that's one awesome post..!! :)reminds me of an old query of mine...a mirror getting broken is an irreversible process...is it true for us humans as well..?..just a thought..!! :)
That's beautiful...absolutely beautiful...
"my shimmering pieces,spread far and wide,like the traveling tears of a lost child ..."Wow... That was deep girl. Doesn't ur brain choke of overload???
@Nothingmanyes, they show broken faces.. hiding crushed hearts
@ZubinYes it is irreversible, we can move on and be happy in other things, might even forget about being broken once, but the truth is that each time we break, a part of us dies forever. That part might be innocence, or trust or love.. or may be all of them..
@Priyathank uHiding ugliness behind a mask of rich brocade beauty, is a common practice :)
@rakeshmy dear friend, I write so as to save my brain from clotting of overload :D
I fell..fell to the unforgiving ground..!!my shimmering pieces,spread far and wide,like the traveling tears of a lost child I fell...fell to the unforgiving ground...my shimmering pieces,spread far and wide,like the travelling tears of a lost child...I live...and my shimmering pieces,spread far and wide,the love and warmth i hold inside,coz children never forget to love,but they do forget to hate the ones who have wronged them..
@vivekwownice poetry.. u remind me of another blogger friend of mine who was in the habit of ending every one of my sad poems with a happy paragraph of his own :)thanks
And he came and picked the piecesfor the peices felt his ownand he thought he'would glue them togetherbut the corners were unknownHe still took them, kept them closeeveryone thought it would cut himbut he knew she was hurt morein days his blood dried, and the mirror was one again !!
wowthat was so sweet...even better than mine :)thanks
You broke.. so that more than one could hide their images in you.You broke... so that more than one could find some clarity in the reflection in you.A single you wasnt enough for the world. It needed a million pieces of you.
my shimmering pieces,spread far and wide,like the traveling tears of a lost child nice lines...sweet poem!
@zephyrwow...I never thought of it like thatthanks :)
sad but beautiful'my shimmering pieces,spread far and wide,like the traveling tears of a lost child 'loved those lines-I
Hey Umang, Wish you a great 2009. Wassup?
Post a Comment